I love: the white spaces the sporadic blurriness the greyness the greetings! the ending the book itself and that each one is its own post.
Much of these details were not your intention, I think, because you chose to post as multimedia messages from work instead of a usual typed post. But it works in favor of the whole poem, I think. It makes it more exciting.
Thank you. Yes, the spontaneity of the piece and the limitation of not being able to post text directly on the blog made it a much more creative piece.
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I love:
the white spaces
the sporadic blurriness
the greyness
the greetings!
the ending
the book itself
and that each one is its own post.
Much of these details were not your intention, I think, because you chose to post as multimedia messages from work instead of a usual typed post. But it works in favor of the whole poem, I think. It makes it more exciting.
I love your new poem.
Thank you. Yes, the spontaneity of the piece and the limitation of not being able to post text directly on the blog made it a much more creative piece.
I found knife etchings today and it reminded me of your poem.
This one too
Ooh - writing lines and poetry on objects is a great idea. Tagging with poetry. Yes!
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