11 September 2007


Page One


Sanguinetti A! said...

I love:
the white spaces
the sporadic blurriness
the greyness
the greetings!
the ending
the book itself
and that each one is its own post.

Much of these details were not your intention, I think, because you chose to post as multimedia messages from work instead of a usual typed post. But it works in favor of the whole poem, I think. It makes it more exciting.

I love your new poem.

Hugo Minor said...

Thank you. Yes, the spontaneity of the piece and the limitation of not being able to post text directly on the blog made it a much more creative piece.

Laurie said...

I found knife etchings today and it reminded me of your poem.

Laurie said...

This one too

Hugo Minor said...

Ooh - writing lines and poetry on objects is a great idea. Tagging with poetry. Yes!